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Solve : Alright I put my thoughts in words.?

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It started Here between Robert and me but these lines FRAMED up in my mind and here it is.


''Fragile leaves are falling on my Patio , they leave no space for the papers on which I wrote my song..............
Every season I see is the season of rain and everything I do is wrong.

As I come down the stairs ,I step into this grass knee high, as long as I can remember been on my own.

Kneel down and tried to pray on my Patio of stone.


Looked up at all those stars that on me once had shone, tossed so many hearts away, so far away thrown .

Was lost in myself, thought I'd never be alone , still thinking of times when stars in my eyes were better that any star that had ever shone.

Close my eyes and pray on my Patio of stone.''

I'll keep adding to this as thoughts come to my mind.
That's really good Ivy.

You have got me thinking all poetically now...Thanks Boo n Lau,

Well someone's name inspired this whole poetry thing........

I wonder who that was? Lauraaaaaaaa you are so innocent!!!!!!

Read my poem carefully, Whose name do you see?Or (hint) whose screen name do you see?SORRY guys I was being sarcastic, anyone who cant see who it is, i'm sorry to say is a bit slow
SmileWho is it guys?!! I really don't know Laura !!

Oh boy I should RUN and hide now...I should but I won't.

If I'm smart I will run away but I'm not so I guess I'll stay , Haaven't you heard , I take my chance on a beautiful stranger....DA da daa di da di da you make me laugh!!!!Glad I can , I like being funny. Hedera helix.....imagine a Latin patio without one. Quote from: street1 on April 29, 2008, 03:21:54 AM

Hedera helix.....imagine a Latin patio without one.

Robert how do you manage to be so kool!!!!!!!

Quote from: Ivy on April 29, 2008, 04:40:13 AM
Quote from: street1 on April 29, 2008, 03:21:54 AM
Hedera helix.....imagine a Latin patio without one.

Robert how do you manage to be so kool!!!!!!!



What can I say lady? I am controlled by a woodpecker and that
freaky little Internet baby.... ::: imagines a reply :::

Dearest Ivy -- at last returned to me,
Why do you sorrow so?
Have you forgotten? Don't you remember?
My heart goes where you go.

I caress you in my fields of grass,
My rain does hide your tears.
When you are lost -- bereft of joy --
My stars shall calm your fears.

What you have tossed and thrown away
Is not beyond my reach --
The path is sometimes difficult,
These lessons I must teach...

Your labyrinthine loneliness,
Your pathway so unsure...
Discern the truth beneath your feet:
I am earth. I endure.

So cast the stars out of your eyes,
See the truth inside of you.
We are not so different, you and I --
Dust to dust, tried and true.

Feel my beating heart beneath you now,
Rough against your flesh and bone.
Never, ever, have I loved you more
Than from my patio of stone.

Oh my God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am SPEECHLESS!!!!!!! Breathless!!!!!!!!!


Thankyou so so much, wow I mean really thankyou so much .

Hey you are a writer , won't it be better if you put this on your site instead(you don't have to include my name ), That way you'll have copy right for this , cause its so beautiful.


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