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Answer» Hi I would like to get opinions and advice on a simple recommendations system I made. Mostly - how much is it clear and helpful visually? That's a page about https://www.glj.io/gaming-laptops-under-1000 (under $1000, but no matter) I that's not the right place, please let me knowFor STARTERS -- the link you posted is not working. I assume it should be -- https://www.glj.io/gaming-laptops-under-1000 that you wanted to be linking to I guess.I corrected the link in the original post.Quote from: Allan on October 18, 2018, 04:13:31 PM I corrected the link in the original post. Thanks! But how can I edit this? the text looks strange right now (-:First, I think you should proofread. There is a lot of very awkward phrasing as well as grammatical weirdness. This makes it difficult to take the text seriously. Also why does something that says it was posted a week AGO have comments claiming to be from 4 years ago?Quote from: BC_Programmer on October 19, 2018, 03:40:46 AM First, I think you should proofread. There is a lot of very awkward phrasing as well as grammatical weirdness. This makes it difficult to take the text seriously. Also why does something that says it was posted a week ago have comments claiming to be from 4 years ago? 1. Thanks. English is not my mother tongue, I guess that's the awkward phrasing comes from. Can you give me a hint? 2. The post is INDEED around 5-5.5 years old, and it kept updated. 3. But I'm more concerned with the filtering and laptop models UIIt's 5 years old...it's outdated...but keep workin on it.Quote from: PATIO on October 19, 2018, 02:22:03 PM It's 5 years old...it's outdated...but keep workin on it. It's 5 years old and being updated. The recommendations are currentDoes anyone use a VPN to play games??

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I would like to get opinions and advice on a simple recommendations system I made. Mostly - how much is it clear and helpful visually?
That's a page about https://www.glj.io/gaming-laptops-under-1000 (under $1000, but no matter)

I that's not the right place, please let me knowFor STARTERS -- the link you posted is not working.

I assume it should be -- https://www.glj.io/gaming-laptops-under-1000 that you wanted to be linking to I guess.I corrected the link in the original post.Quote from: Allan on October 18, 2018, 04:13:31 PM

I corrected the link in the original post.

Thanks! But how can I edit this? the text looks strange right now (-:First, I think you should proofread. There is a lot of very awkward phrasing as well as grammatical weirdness. This makes it difficult to take the text seriously.

Also why does something that says it was posted a week AGO have comments claiming to be from 4 years ago?Quote from: BC_Programmer on October 19, 2018, 03:40:46 AM

First, I think you should proofread. There is a lot of very awkward phrasing as well as grammatical weirdness. This makes it difficult to take the text seriously.

Also why does something that says it was posted a week ago have comments claiming to be from 4 years ago?

1. Thanks. English is not my mother tongue, I guess that's the awkward phrasing comes from. Can you give me a hint?
2. The post is INDEED around 5-5.5 years old, and it kept updated.
3. But I'm more concerned with the filtering and laptop models UIIt's 5 years old...it's outdated...but keep workin on it.Quote from: PATIO on October 19, 2018, 02:22:03 PM

It's 5 years old...it's outdated...but keep workin on it.

It's 5 years old and being updated. The recommendations are currentDoes anyone use a VPN to play games??

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